I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 12 December 2019
Thursday, 28 November 2019
Pancake Story
Can you comment on my blog. Is this work funny?
I was cooking delicious fluffy pancakes for my breakfast. When I flipped one it flew and bounce into my little brother’s face. Rolled into the hallway to the opened door, Rolled to the front door, slides to the muddy grass making it muddy. Onto the road and got hit by a car but still rolling. It fell into the drain,floating into the filthy water and landed in the radiated pond and the dirty pancake got duplicated.
Thursday, 14 November 2019
Reading
Hi guys this is one of my reading work. Can you comment on my blog please.
Summer sports
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Winter sports
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Wednesday, 6 November 2019
Improved sentence
Hi guys this is my improved sentence. Can you comment on my blog.
Before
The great ship sailed majestically until the silly rode into a nice wave and everyone got wet.
After
The magnificent ship voyage terrifically until the unintelligent captain steered into a monstrous tsunami and made everyone soaked.
Before
The great ship sailed majestically until the silly rode into a nice wave and everyone got wet.
After
The magnificent ship voyage terrifically until the unintelligent captain steered into a monstrous tsunami and made everyone soaked.
Thursday, 26 September 2019
Monday, 16 September 2019
Thursday, 12 September 2019
Tuesday, 10 September 2019
Thursday, 29 August 2019
Thursday, 22 August 2019
Tuesday, 20 August 2019
Tuesday, 13 August 2019
Persuasive Writing
This week we have been learning to write a persuasive piece of writing. The things we needed to include were topic, introduction, reasons, examples and conclusion. My topic was Too much money is a good thing.Do you agree or disagree. Can you comment on this
Thursday, 8 August 2019
Reading
Hi guys today we read a text called working animals I hope you. like it and make sure you comment on this blog.
Wednesday, 7 August 2019
Friday, 2 August 2019
Screencastify About Me
This week we practised to screencastify. We have been given a blogger buddy his name is Zaak. I have made this so my buddy knows about me.
Tuesday, 30 July 2019
Persuasive Writing
This week we did persuasive writing hope you enjoy and please comment on this work it really means to me :)
Thursday, 4 July 2019
My Reading Work
Hi, Today I'm gonna show you my reading work.
Can you give me some feedback it really means to me :)
Can you give me some feedback it really means to me :)
Thursday, 13 June 2019
Descriptive writing
Inside of a cockpit
By Joshua
The shiny orange sun was rising on the left and the clear dark blue was
on the opposite Side. The sun looks like a flaming orb.
The professional pilot was controlling a commercial plane by using the
buttons. The pilot wears a white shirt with a dark brown tie and dark
Glasses.
Hi my name is Joshua.This is a descriptive writing.Can you tell me about this work:)
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