I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 13 August 2019
Persuasive Writing
This week we have been learning to write a persuasive piece of writing. The things we needed to include were topic, introduction, reasons, examples and conclusion. My topic was Too much money is a good thing.Do you agree or disagree. Can you comment on this
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hello Joshua. its me Levi. I like the way you put adjectives in your writing. maybe next time you can add longer sentences and more similes in your writing. I have also worked on this writing because I was in you group for writing. All right then bye hope you have a good day.
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