Pancake Story

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I was cooking delicious fluffy pancakes for my breakfast. When I flipped one it flew and bounce into my little brother’s face. Rolled into the hallway to the opened door, Rolled to the front door, slides to the muddy grass making it muddy. Onto the road and got hit by a car but still rolling. It fell into the drain,floating into the filthy water and landed in the radiated pond and the dirty pancake got duplicated.

Reading

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Improved sentence

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Before
The great ship sailed majestically until the silly rode into a nice wave and everyone got wet.

After
The magnificent ship voyage terrifically until the unintelligent captain steered into a monstrous tsunami and made everyone soaked. 

What am I

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