Lockdown Work

Hi guys today I finished my lock down writing work. My task is to type a narrative story. This is my story. I hope you enjoy. If you like it you can comment on it. If there something wrong you can comment too so I can fix it. 

Story

One hot summer day in Marco Island in Florida,USA.  Ralph and Peter went to the docks to drive Ralph’s boat to find sunken old ships for treasure. 15 minutes later. Peter saw a  crashed ship near an island. They park the boat near the ship. They tried to find an entrance but they couldn't find any entrance so they grabbed a sledgehammer to make an entrance. They found a very looking historical chest right beside a chair covered with cobwebs. Peter opened the chest. And  their eyes and mouth got wide and open. They found a meter by meter painite. 

Peter shouted “WHAT IS THIS !” “That’s painite”Ralph said to Peter. We could sell this ore for big bucks. Who should we sell it to? “To the ore museum” Peter said. “We should sell it to one of the most popular ore museums in America.” “We should sell it in New York”. OK Ralph said. “Were gonna drive to NY.” “We need to get supplies to get there like gas, extra car parts, Food, Water.” Where do we place this painite? Peter said. We should put it in my old fish bowl. Ralph said. “But the question is can it fit though.” “ It can fit it in my aquarium.” The size of it is 2m by 2m remember? “Yeah I remember now” Said Ralph.

  

30 minutes later. *Puts Painite in fish bowl* “See it can fit” Peter said. “We’ve got a week to get supplies to drive to NY. A week Later. “Are you ready?” Said Peter “Yes” Said Ralph. They hop in the car and start driving. Suddenly a RAH-66 Comanche ( A stealth Helicopter) started following the vehicle where Ralph and Peter are in. Let’s go sell it at the New York Ore Museum said Peter . Good let’s sell it there, Ralph said. The RAH-66 Comanche flew away.

2 weeks later in their hotel. We made it, Ralph said.We should better eat dinner said Ralph.Yeah OK Said Peter. 26 hours later at the entrance of the museum.Okay are we ready? Yes Said Peter. As they enter the museum a man is waiting at the door. Hello. Welcome to New York’s best ore museum in America. My name is … Nick Finite. Nice to meet you my name is Ralph and this person is Peter. Hi Said Peter. How can I help you? 

We need to sell a painite Sir said Peter. Ok get in to my office. Follow me gentlemen. *In the office* So where is this... ore? Here you go sir Said Ralph. *Ralph gave it to Nick* Hmm pretty big soooo…...BYE Nick removes his disguise and it’s actually Nuck Fint. He Dash straight through the door and quickly followed by Ralph and Peter. HEY STOP THIEF!! Said Peter. Nuck went up the stairs. And opened a door that led to the helipad with a RAH-66 Comanche on.He jumped into the helicopter. Peter and Ralph are at the door saying COME BACK THIEF!!We gotta get it back said Ralph. Ok we need a plan. It’s that stupid Nuck Fint again! We need help. Let’s go back to the hotel. Okay said Ralph.*At the hotel* We need to get information about him. ….Oh here he lived in Florida Miami Mountain. It is very secured and very foggy. We need to get equipped to get it back. 

1 month later at night time. We are ready to infiltrate the manor. You ready Peter? Yeah. They dig a small tunnel to squeeze right through.They use the goodbye camera(A thing that makes nearby security cameras go offline for 5 minutes) They used a rope to climb up the building. Climbed down the  chimney and into the kitchen and turned on night vision goggles. They go down into the basement. They used the goodbye camera and opened the vault where they found the painite. They used a gas grenade to see if there are red lines. There weren’t any. They took the painite but the alarm tripped  so they ran as fast as they could and went to the getaway boat. Their plan is to go to Texas and hide there. 2 days later. They are now in Texas and hide in their house. 

THE END